User talk:Skhurshid

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DAVID

Shaan — I just read your great work on DAVID. Although the quality of the entry is great, the first paragraph in the Major Points section could benefit from additional editing. My main concern is that the language used is a bit too esoteric for non-cardiologists like myself. As you know, many medical students and residents will be reading this information and will need to make sense of it on their first read without consulting too many additional sources. Thanks for understanding! Regards, Dave Iberri (talk) 20:32, 25 July 2016 (UTC)